love kills
love heals
but worst of all love makes you think
makes you wonder and say to yourself
is this real
is this what I want
it makes you end it
what you thought you had was good
is now a long confusing sad story
but in the end love does none other than love you right back,
as you have loved it before
Hey Mrs.Benson, I didnt know if when writing a poem I had to add commas capilization at the begining of stanzas and stuff, so i did none of that. If i am supposed to though just let me know and I'll get right on it!
ReplyDeletemy favorite line is love kills
ReplyDeleteGo figure: Geoge likes one of the saddest lines.
ReplyDeleteNope, no rules in free form, free verse poetry
ReplyDeleteI actually like that line too George. It grabs you and has you wondering what kind of love this could be.